在SSAT考试中SSAT写作是我们备考的一个难点，很多学生往往只是重视词汇和语法水平的提升，忽略文章内容和架构，以及常常会遇到的错误点和写作难点，导致文章质量不高。接下来我们就来说一说如何避免一些常见的写作错误！

　　SSAT作文错误应用自己的事例最重要的问题是主观性太大，没有太多的代表性。尤其是，对于自己的例子，考生提前准备的几率并不大，所以如果没有对文章结构等的把握能力，最好不要用。

　　长句有两个问题，一是中国学生水平不够，很难写出语法没有错误、意思表达准确的长句，语法错误、几个逗号连用、倒装从句混合是经常的。二是看essay的人也是人，经常是那种大学生研究生，没人愿意看长句混在一起的文章，短剧更讨人喜欢，并且表达意思更加清晰，准确。

　　Although we were opposed to the program, we thought that despite its bilateral support, it would accomplish a little.We opposed the program, despite its bilateral support, because we thought it would accomplish little.

　　点评：句子原意为“尽管该计划如何如何好，我们反对它，因为.....先弄清句意。表原因还是用更简单的“because”。

　　2.The tomatoes at this fruit stand are much more plump, fresh and tasty than the fruit stand located in the lobby of the building in which I work. much more plump, fresh and tasty than those sold at the fruit stand located in the lobby of the building.

　　点评：这个句子中比较了多个项目。在多个比较中可以用“much more/less adj+adj+adj+...”的形式。

　　3.While several baseball teams have tried to supplant the Yankees as the dominant team in baseball, their inability has been unable to win even half as many WS as the Yankees have won in the past>　　点评：平行结构，时态，句式一致。CUUS -- Chinese Undergraduates in the United States4.The tiger, a relative of the B tiger, has been described as the strongest tiger and also the most peaceful of them.the strongest and yet the most peaceful of tigers.

　　点评：和前面一题类似。

　　5.The price of gold has been influenced by continued inflation and because people have lost faith in the dollar. loss of faith点评：平行结构。

　　出现My brother, friend的时候要加上名字，出现university的时候要给上名字，给出事例的时候要给出时间地点人物，没人愿意看“我的弟弟去了一个大学，然后再大学里交了很多朋友，后来去了公司里那些朋友成为了他的财富”，而“我的弟弟Dan去了Upenn读书，在学校里认识了Jeff、Dennis等好朋友，而他后来去Google公司工作的时候发现了他们成为了自己一生宝贵的财富”比上面那句好了很多。实在要写流水账也要写出细节和感觉。

　　6.If we compare the number of alligators with the Gila monsters over time, we see that the alligator is in decline. A comparison overtime of the numbers of alligators and Gila monsters shows that alligators are点评：直接用“comparison”更简洁。同时还是要(老问题了)注意比较的对象，数量必须和数量比。

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